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Wonder's Fabulous Poems!

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Post by Wonderwoof Sat 17 Sep 2011, 12:47

I decided to write poems on here.



Poem #1: The Brook



The Brook swayed around my leg,

Only to bring me better days,

To share the life that I once had,

To give me hope when I feel sad,

To show the light inside my heart,

And fleed the evil in the dark.



If you guys have any suggestions or you want to be a character in my poems, just post!
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Post by Fangs Sat 17 Sep 2011, 12:56

AMAZING! One suggestion: POST MORE!!!
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Post by Wonderwoof Sat 17 Sep 2011, 12:58

LOL, I will...
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Post by Miss Mandy Sat 17 Sep 2011, 13:00

Really awesome!!! Good work :)
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Post by Wonderwoof Sat 17 Sep 2011, 13:02

Tyvm...
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Post by Fangs Sat 17 Sep 2011, 13:03

I hope you post more...
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Post by Wonderwoof Sun 18 Sep 2011, 13:22

Poem #2-The Beauty of a Toon

The Beauty of a Toon,

The Glory of its heart,

The way you feel when love,

Wraps its arms around you,

The way the angels whisper,

The toons last hope,

The beauty of a toon,

The love of its fellow neighbors.
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Post by Fangs Sun 18 Sep 2011, 13:36

Nice!!!
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Post by Wonderwoof Sun 18 Sep 2011, 13:38

Ty!
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Post by Fangs Sun 18 Sep 2011, 13:40

NP!!!
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Post by Lady Trickster Sat 24 Sep 2011, 10:22

Awesome! :D
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Post by Fangs Sat 24 Sep 2011, 10:25

More please!
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Post by Lady Trickster Sat 24 Sep 2011, 10:28

Yeah :D
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Post by Fangs Sat 24 Sep 2011, 10:43

Can it be today, Wonder? I just can't wait...
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Post by Wonderwoof Sat 24 Sep 2011, 12:40

Poem #3-The Cupcake



The Cupcake with its grace,

Brings a smile to my face,

It's soft and moist cake shell,

To its delecant frosting,

Makes all of us jump for joy,

It's inspirational,

It's The Cupcake
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Post by Fangs Tue 18 Dec 2012, 22:35

Oh, and it's delicious!
Great poem, Wonderwoof!
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