Desperation

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Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter.

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Um, A GUEST JUST POSTED?!

That's Fangs' deleted acc. It gets shown as a guest.

Chapter 2

I know I said that I wouldn't write in this again, but I can't resist. I'm so bored right now!

Right now, in fact I'm in school. Mr. Gilberts, our Cog-Ology teacher, is teaching us about things we already know. He thinks I'm taking notes but I'm really just writing in here. Hehe!

I've fixed Twin-Me. Kind of. After I got the right parts I rebuilt her with a new Version 2 circuit board, to prevent it from happening again. But the strangest thing is… She just stood there, looking at me with red eyes.

I've never seen her do that before. Her eyes are blue.

Remember how I told you in the beginning how if my machines aren't used correctly, they can turn evil? That's what I'm fearing. And if that happens…

Let's just say it's going to be bad. I don't want to get into what will happen if she turns evil. But one thing will happen is she will create more, and more.

Ugh… Mr. Gilberts is asking me what percent will a level be if a level 12 Cog misses a level 4 drop?

"Uh… 65?" I guessed.

"Incorrect! Deeply, deeply incorrect!" Mr. Gilberts scolded. "65.4 is the correct answer!"

My day just gets weirder and weirder.

LATER

How I hate Lilac. While she was shoe shopping, she noticed I was writing in a diary instead of writing my essay. She told it to one of her friends, a short brown cat named Darling, who was such a big gossip, and told practically everyone in the whole school.

Now when people pass me by, they give me strange looks. Looks like I'm not a Toon. Strange. Is it that bad to write in a diary!?

The only one who would sit with me at lunch is Peppermint, a red horse with braces. When she says the letter 's' she makes a 'sh' sound. No one likes her because she's so annoying. I'd rather eat alone then sit with her.

Lilac suggests some shoe shopping could make me feel better, but she refuses to go with me because as she says, "If I'm seen with you, my popularity will plunge so fast, I'll have to sit with Peppermint at lunch!"

I don't blame her. Sitting with Peppermint at lunch is like a curse put on you. Literally every 5 seconds she would poke you and pretend it wasn't her.

Instead of shoe shopping, I decided to go to the hardware store, which did have a section of robot and computer system parts, strange enough; as they had their store in the place where all robots, not just Cogs were despised; home of Flippy, Prof. Pete, and many other very important Toons in the Toon Council: ToonTown Central.

It was called BK's Hardware Store. I walked into there, where BK noticed me walking in and said, "Hey there, Lil'. Ya ready ta buy a new syst'm?" I nodded, as I was ready to make my latest robot. He smiled and showed me his selection. I got the one I wanted, a few cables, too, for good measure, in case anything went wrong; and I went home.

But on the way I saw Twin-Me, and she was glowing at me with red eyes, picking up some red tape, and before I could do anything, tied me up. I passed out and she bring me to a dark, lonely place.

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No chapters in a long time. O_O

Yeah, it's just, school, homework and stuff :P

I'm going to post it today.

I can't wait!

Good thing, 'cause here it is!

Chapter 3

All I can see is the dim light of the mostly covered window, and I'm scared. All I have with me is this diary, and my system parts.

All I know is that I've been out for at least a day, and I've just woken up; and I have amnesia. I don't know pretty much anything that's happened in the last… I don't even know. I have amnesia, remember? But I've read what I have written before in this diary, and I know what's important.

There's a dim figure coming in this room; slowly he walks down the steps and I shiver in fear as I see his face: red demon eyes and the face of a shark. I reach in the secret pocket sewn within my clothes, searching for my gag pouch, when it hit me.

If Twin-Me was working with the Cogs, they would be smart enough to confiscate me. They would find my gag pouch, even if it was hidden. I was left defenseless.

I grabbed a shiny metal robot part and looked at my self in the mirror.

EWW.

My red hair is all up in the air, my eyes have crust in them, my clothes are all torn, and I have band-aids all over me… (They must have given me shots to keep me asleep...)

I totally forgot about the Loan Shark, until I saw his eyes glow. And then, I realized he was a robot. And I knew a lot about robots. And I had robots parts. Which meant that I could disable him easily. I didn't need any gags. If I could only get close enough.

I walked to the end of my cell. I knew Loan Sharks could easily tricked. "You think you're a Cog? If you're a brave Cog you would challenge me."

I tore out a page of my diary and drew a 10$ bill with my lucky pen. I lured him and turned him around, finding his self-destruct button. I activated it, and he destructed. It's a bit silly why Cogs have self-destruct buttons, but the Cog Bosses kill the Cogs if they've broken the Cog-Code. And that's a great thing for Toons, so… Who cares?!

Suddenly a hear a familiar shriek; and then before I could move, it came at me…

What's the it? WHAT'S THE IT?
So suspenseful!!!

No one knows... xD

LOL. So creepy...

I GIVE HUGE CREDIT TO MISS MANDY, WHO HELPED ME GET IDEAS. THANKS, MANDY! =)



I just stood there.

Why...? I don't know! I don't know what I do... It's like I'm being controlled. I do things without my will.

Without my will.

This gives me an idea...

I can't write it here. They're watching me... Anyways. It was coming at me, and I stood there. It was a Toon... No, not a Toon. It was a tall, green cat. She had a silvery glint to herself. She was unconscious, so when I found my glass of water from lunch, I threw it at her. Her grey eyes fluttered open, and she looked like she was in too much pain to get up.

"I'm dying," she said. "I'm fading...I've failed being a Cog-Toon." She held a silver key in her hand. She was gripping it strongly.

"A Cog-Toon?" I asked, nervously. I felt sorry for her. A tear slid down her cheeks, made of steel. I didn't know Cogs could cry.

"Yes. I was a Toon once, like you. But I have failed the Cog-Father, betrayed him. I have gotten what I have deserved."

It sounded kind of cruel to be thrown in a jail cell like that. She didn't deserve that! No Toons deserve that.

"He has jailed me. Run. Run while you are still alive. He shows no mercy." she continued.

"I can't... What way is there out?" I sighed, sitting on a rock. I buried my long red hair in my arms.

"Many. But none of which I know of." she said.

"What was your name?" I asked. "when you were a Toon."

"I had no name. But I was called Flower Petals, because I always smelled so. What is yours?"

"The name's Apple. How old were you when you were made a Cog?"

She paused for a moment. "It was a long time ago. Cogs never age, and I was taken in as a child. I don't remember anyone, except my friends growing up as a Cog. And my Cog Mother, she was nice. Perhaps she was a Cog-Toon like me."

I didn't notice, but the door was swinging open. I could hear someone shouting, "no problem!" it was a male voice, maybe a Toon, maybe a Cog. I couldn't tell.

"Who was that?"

"I don't know."

"We can't waste any time. Let's get you to the hospital."

Getting through the Cog HQ was a breeze. Since no one had heard about Petals being demoted, or whatever she had gone through, she said that she was taking me outside to 'wire' me, or whatever that means. She was barely standing and every breath sounded like her last.

As soon as we got outside, I commanded her to lay down. After a good ten minutes, I picked her up and started walking. I followed her directions to ToonTown Central, and soon we were in the middle of a desert.

"We're lost." I declared, as if not obvious already, and she grunted.

BUMP!

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