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Re: Desperation
by Lady Trickster Thu 29 Sep 2011, 19:52
I GIVE HUGE CREDIT TO MISS MANDY, WHO HELPED ME GET IDEAS. THANKS, MANDY! =)
I just stood there.
Why...? I don't know! I don't know what I do... It's like I'm being controlled. I do things without my will.
Without my will.
This gives me an idea...
I can't write it here. They're watching me... Anyways. It was coming at me, and I stood there. It was a Toon... No, not a Toon. It was a tall, green cat. She had a silvery glint to herself. She was unconscious, so when I found my glass of water from lunch, I threw it at her. Her grey eyes fluttered open, and she looked like she was in too much pain to get up.
"I'm dying," she said. "I'm fading...I've failed being a Cog-Toon." She held a silver key in her hand. She was gripping it strongly.
"A Cog-Toon?" I asked, nervously. I felt sorry for her. A tear slid down her cheeks, made of steel. I didn't know Cogs could cry.
"Yes. I was a Toon once, like you. But I have failed the Cog-Father, betrayed him. I have gotten what I have deserved."
It sounded kind of cruel to be thrown in a jail cell like that. She didn't deserve that! No Toons deserve that.
"He has jailed me. Run. Run while you are still alive. He shows no mercy." she continued.
"I can't... What way is there out?" I sighed, sitting on a rock. I buried my long red hair in my arms.
"Many. But none of which I know of." she said.
"What was your name?" I asked. "when you were a Toon."
"I had no name. But I was called Flower Petals, because I always smelled so. What is yours?"
"The name's Apple. How old were you when you were made a Cog?"
She paused for a moment. "It was a long time ago. Cogs never age, and I was taken in as a child. I don't remember anyone, except my friends growing up as a Cog. And my Cog Mother, she was nice. Perhaps she was a Cog-Toon like me."
I didn't notice, but the door was swinging open. I could hear someone shouting, "no problem!" it was a male voice, maybe a Toon, maybe a Cog. I couldn't tell.
"Who was that?"
"I don't know."
"We can't waste any time. Let's get you to the hospital."
Getting through the Cog HQ was a breeze. Since no one had heard about Petals being demoted, or whatever she had gone through, she said that she was taking me outside to 'wire' me, or whatever that means. She was barely standing and every breath sounded like her last.
As soon as we got outside, I commanded her to lay down. After a good ten minutes, I picked her up and started walking. I followed her directions to ToonTown Central, and soon we were in the middle of a desert.
"We're lost." I declared, as if not obvious already, and she grunted.
I just stood there.
Why...? I don't know! I don't know what I do... It's like I'm being controlled. I do things without my will.
Without my will.
This gives me an idea...
I can't write it here. They're watching me... Anyways. It was coming at me, and I stood there. It was a Toon... No, not a Toon. It was a tall, green cat. She had a silvery glint to herself. She was unconscious, so when I found my glass of water from lunch, I threw it at her. Her grey eyes fluttered open, and she looked like she was in too much pain to get up.
"I'm dying," she said. "I'm fading...I've failed being a Cog-Toon." She held a silver key in her hand. She was gripping it strongly.
"A Cog-Toon?" I asked, nervously. I felt sorry for her. A tear slid down her cheeks, made of steel. I didn't know Cogs could cry.
"Yes. I was a Toon once, like you. But I have failed the Cog-Father, betrayed him. I have gotten what I have deserved."
It sounded kind of cruel to be thrown in a jail cell like that. She didn't deserve that! No Toons deserve that.
"He has jailed me. Run. Run while you are still alive. He shows no mercy." she continued.
"I can't... What way is there out?" I sighed, sitting on a rock. I buried my long red hair in my arms.
"Many. But none of which I know of." she said.
"What was your name?" I asked. "when you were a Toon."
"I had no name. But I was called Flower Petals, because I always smelled so. What is yours?"
"The name's Apple. How old were you when you were made a Cog?"
She paused for a moment. "It was a long time ago. Cogs never age, and I was taken in as a child. I don't remember anyone, except my friends growing up as a Cog. And my Cog Mother, she was nice. Perhaps she was a Cog-Toon like me."
I didn't notice, but the door was swinging open. I could hear someone shouting, "no problem!" it was a male voice, maybe a Toon, maybe a Cog. I couldn't tell.
"Who was that?"
"I don't know."
"We can't waste any time. Let's get you to the hospital."
Getting through the Cog HQ was a breeze. Since no one had heard about Petals being demoted, or whatever she had gone through, she said that she was taking me outside to 'wire' me, or whatever that means. She was barely standing and every breath sounded like her last.
As soon as we got outside, I commanded her to lay down. After a good ten minutes, I picked her up and started walking. I followed her directions to ToonTown Central, and soon we were in the middle of a desert.
"We're lost." I declared, as if not obvious already, and she grunted.
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Re: Desperation
by Fangs Sat 22 Oct 2011, 10:59
Chapter hasn't been out since last month. When's the new chapter?
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Re: Desperation
by Lady Trickster Sun 23 Oct 2011, 09:44
Im sorry... I'm banned from the computer and when I do come on I'm on my iPhone...
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